What's here is very good-lots done very quickly! However, a couple of things to bear in mind:
1. No evidence of drafting for main production-this is the main thing missing at the moment and affecting your mark 2. Proofread your posts: a lot have frequent typos and spelling/punc issues-especially the evaluation of the preliminary task. 3. You might want to consider reformatting your codes and conventions research-check the model blogs. Your content here is good, but the presentation could be better. 4. More media theory needs dripping in to the codes and conventions work-especially uses & grats. 5.Keep referring back to focus group for "help" with key decisions.
As this is still technically partially incomplete, I can't go above 11/20 at the moment. However, once the drafts are here I would be on 14/20. Make the other corrections/ammendments and this can go higher still.
Well done for making changes to R&P-final mark here is 14,maybe 15 out of 20(after moderation!). Having looked quickly at your production, the front cover is excellent, the contents pretty good but the double page spread is letting this down: why is the image so roughly cut out? This needs addressing. Also, not quite sure what you've put under the evaluation tag-but it isn't what needs doing for this element! Speak more next week...
Well done Abbie-all finished! I've double checked both your r&p and your production and have changed the marks up to 15/20 and 45/60. Your evaluation is good-and if the last few questions (particularly the technology q) were as detailed as the first few, I'd have been on 17, maybe higher. As it is the final mark here is 15/20.
This gives you a grand total of 75%-a mid B grade. To get a B grade for the whole AS, you now need a mid C grade in the exam.
What's here is very good-lots done very quickly! However, a couple of things to bear in mind:
ReplyDelete1. No evidence of drafting for main production-this is the main thing missing at the moment and affecting your mark
2. Proofread your posts: a lot have frequent typos and spelling/punc issues-especially the evaluation of the preliminary task.
3. You might want to consider reformatting your codes and conventions research-check the model blogs. Your content here is good, but the presentation could be better.
4. More media theory needs dripping in to the codes and conventions work-especially uses & grats.
5.Keep referring back to focus group for "help" with key decisions.
As this is still technically partially incomplete, I can't go above 11/20 at the moment. However, once the drafts are here I would be on 14/20. Make the other corrections/ammendments and this can go higher still.
11/20 LAF 04/02/16
Well done for making changes to R&P-final mark here is 14,maybe 15 out of 20(after moderation!). Having looked quickly at your production, the front cover is excellent, the contents pretty good but the double page spread is letting this down: why is the image so roughly cut out? This needs addressing. Also, not quite sure what you've put under the evaluation tag-but it isn't what needs doing for this element! Speak more next week...
ReplyDeleteWell done Abbie-all finished! I've double checked both your r&p and your production and have changed the marks up to 15/20 and 45/60. Your evaluation is good-and if the last few questions (particularly the technology q) were as detailed as the first few, I'd have been on 17, maybe higher. As it is the final mark here is 15/20.
ReplyDeleteThis gives you a grand total of 75%-a mid B grade. To get a B grade for the whole AS, you now need a mid C grade in the exam.